A simple scheme for structuring an argument
Set up a question or problem
Thesis
Show that there is a problem
Define terms
Your explanation of how your thesis applies (any historical or background information we need to know? Plot structure?)
Guide us through evidence
***respond to OPPOSING VIEWS, and explain why you disagree with those views--and say if you accept some of your opponent's ideas
Or, in an interpretive paper, show possible alternative readings
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Detailed OUTLINE of an ARGUMENT PAPER
Note: Most parts of this scheme can be switched around. Any of the subclaims could be turned into your main thesis.
Also, remember to make transitions between sections. A good way to make a transition is to pick up an idea from the clincher sentence at the end of the previous section and respond to it.
Remember too that each section may need several paragraphs to explain and to support with evidence. You do not need to restrict yourself to 5 paragraphs.
Underline or italicize all titles of books or whole volumes (newspaper titles, for example); put the titles of essays, articles, short works, or chapters in "quotation marks."
First paragraph: Introduction
Body of paper - as many paragraphs as you need
Subclaim # 1 - Describe the problem or question.
That is, you are claiming that there IS a problem, or a question, raised by
the material. (Quote evidence from your materials to describe the problem.)
This is a good place to describe the background or history of the problem. You
will also want to DEFINE any terms or concepts that you will use to explain
the problem. Make sure that all terms you use in your thesis statement are
clearly explained.
Clinch your view of the problem with a strong statement.
Subclaim # 2 - Make your argument about how the problem can be fixed or
explained (elaborate your thesis point).
Argue your reasons strongly, and explain why the evidence supports your
reasons ("warrant").
Provide "backing" for your explanations. That is, find authoritative sources
or ideas (quote them) that support the connection you make between your thesis
and your evidence.
Clinch your view of the problem with a strong statement.
Subclaim #3 - Refute opposing views.
Gather ideas or evidence that would challenge or oppose yours. Who would be
likely to disagree with you? Provide sources.
Refute (prove wrong) these challenges to your argument, point by point.
Here's another important thing to realize: Your opponents are probably NOT
totally wrong. What part of their ideas would you accept? Could you actually
turn some of their ideas into helps for your own argument? Could you use them
to make a more precise point? Grab onto whichever of their ideas could be
turned into support for yours.
Clinch your argument by reasserting your own thesis--perhaps in a fuller
way--against these opposing views.
Subclaim #4 - Explain why your views are significant or meaningful.
Explain what consequences follow from the problems and solutions you have
studied. These are the implications of the debate. Show how your views can be
applied to other cases/examples.
Clinch your view of the significance of the problem with a strong statement.
Conclusion
Leave your reader with a clearer, fuller vision of your thesis. By now, after full discussion, you can allow us to see a more complex and nuanced view than a simple thesis can offer.
Soar. Move us. Or leave us with a parting shot.